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Beta-Collie (Page 07)

Fang should have probably heard himself the first time. The fur keep spreading as the story continues...

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Beta-Collie (Page 07) Beta-Collie (Page 07)

Comments

LOL :D

LoboLEO

Thanks!

LoboLEO

Pretty much :D

LoboLEO

Thanks :)

LoboLEO

Great page ! :D

Goblinounours

I always have a problem with when to use "it's" or " is" with some verbs. And thanks :)

LoboLEO

Solid Page Leo, some grammar issues to consider. "Why is getting so fluffy now." could be "Why is it becoming so fluffy now?" and "This warm itch, I can feel it spread through." could be, "This warming itch, I can feel it spreading all over the rest of my body too." and "Now is getting really hot." could be, "Now it's getting really hot." still though a very good page dude.

Antifreeze

It's getting hot in here. So take off all your clothes. Oh, wait... she is. ;) Also, Fang looks like the kid that walked into his parents unlocked bedroom.

KC

It just keeps getting better page by page

"Now it's really getting hot in here." Understatement of the year. :3

BerryWhite


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