Alpha Luna Ch 5. Page 34 EDIT
Added 2017-06-25 18:40:29 +0000 UTCAfter a second glance I couldn't shake the idea that I needed to rework the second panel due the change in dialogue. Originally the second bubble text is what would go over the original second panel. But in the end the text there depicted the time when Luna was starting to become a loner and I felt that I needed to reflect that.
The original second panel was "ok" but it was linked more to an specific incident she had that she talked about in "Collie's Spirit", in any case I also think this art works better overall.
Please comment :)
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Comments
Thank you :)
LoboLEO
2017-06-25 19:43:52 +0000 UTCPersonal opinion: Both were good. But in context of the story and the way this page is done, i have to admit this panel works better. But at the end, i still think this whole scene is fantastic ;-)
NiWo21k
2017-06-25 18:45:55 +0000 UTC
