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GITJ Post 361: That was Then, This is Now, p13

How had I let myself get so distracted?!? Melissa Monroe, new Office Manager for what was at the time still Far Horizon Medical Associates, scolded herself as she waited for the elevator. Dammit. Dammit dammit dammit! she nearly sputtered, bouncing on her toes impatiently, Why didn’t we put in emergency stairs to this level?!?

She’d been, she knew, too wrapped up in her visit with the boys, her admirers, the devotees she had downstairs. Most of the crew were hard at work on the construction, finishing what needed to be finished, but some were down here in the lowest sub-basement resting, eating, hanging out. A few were in the chapel already. It made them feel better when she dropped in, and she had to admit she secretly liked all the praise and admiration and kneeling. One of them had come up with a little chant for the others, which sounded sorta like a prayer. That made her tingle.

No! Stop it! You have to stay focused! she thought, taking herself back to task as the elevator door opened and she entered, violently mashing the button for the lobby level. He needs me!! She could feel it now, plainly, like it was vinegar on her tongue: he was in danger, he was upset, and she wasn’t there. Thank gods Aubrey had called her, used the emergency alert on her phone, or else she might not had known until it was too late, distracted as she was by her devotees and their humming. She hadn’t been aware at all! Aware that he needed her! Oh, Jay! I have to keep you closer! From now on I'm not letting you out of my sight! Ever! This world is too big and dangerous for you. I need to keep you with me!!

<Ding!>

The doors opened, and Melissa Monroe - now on the Atrium Level - took off like a blur out of the elevator. He needed her! And she was going to save him!

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thanks to my editor RiF

Comments

There is definitely something different about Dr J - he's been a target, it seems, from the very beginning. Whose target, though? And why does it make him react differently to the effects of the hive than others? I think you hit on a few truths, for sure, but will there be a day where he might not be all that different, and we'll see him prostrate in front of that altar with all the other little stick-figures?

stevebasic

There might be plenty going on that is contributing, but I think the best answer is to answer your question with a question: What makes one's significant other any different than any other girl/guy? I think that gets to the heart of it.

Resistanceisfutile

This makes me really curious about Dr. J. What, if anything, separates him from the workers in the sub-basement? Is he just lucky, in that he has social proximity to the conspiracy through his ex-wife and/or a business they wanted to take over, "further along" as a person "vulni-fied" earlier and more extensively, or is there something special about him (brains? physiology? preexisting mommy-fetish?) that makes him a more natural focus for the attentions of Melissa and her hive?

GrillFan65

Wonder what Melissa thinks, being up on that altar?

stevebasic

The title picture is a very enlightening touch. Great post!

Ruby Teagan


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