Diaper Quest: Next feedback

There's no rough script sorry. I just cut out the part where you can see Dobron forging the shield he later uses in his last fight. The symbol on the shield is a constellation, which also happens to be visible at night in the last page where Cornelius is looking at the stars. I probabily aso cut parts of small talk with villagers and made Dobron die regularly instead of having a dramatic moment for his final speech. I kind of regret that now but I didn't like the increasing number of dislikes on that part so I cut it a bit shorter.

The fan service is good but I'm much more interested in the story. Since you said you cut out a bit of back story, would you happen to have saved a rough script somewhere? I'd love to read that.

Destombera

Though I like how DQ has a good amount of story content, I agree with your decision to review the pacing. I hope you can find a balance between story and fanservice that works for you and your followers.

Personally, I’m fine with the current pacing, I thinks it’s more or less just finding the right balance between the two between what you feel is ‘good storytelling’ and fanservice. DQ:Next hasn’t been my favorite, but, I think you’re doing a good job as is

I'm okay with whatever you think would work better. though in my opinion a story about the character who wears the diaper is better and sexier and hotter than a story about the diaper that the character wears. because when some diaper action happens you feel more Impact and get more turned on. and as I said before I'm okay with any approach you take.

Personally I've never strongly followed DQ. Even the first part. I just am not invested in fantasy series most of the time. However I wouldn't change the pace since that would mess with the orginal vision. I'd be fine with just a slower amount of pages made.

I agree. If people want just fanservice type stuff, that's what the Sketches, Commissions, and Animations are there for as far as I'm concerned. I believe the comics have the right amount of story: fanservice ratio.

blarg1

I’m probably in the minority here, but I did enjoy that sequence of history, it adds to the characters. Making them something more than just something to slap diapers on. I can imagine it’s a hard balance between satisfying your patrons and wanting to tell the story you have in mind. Here’s hoping you can still fit in some of that tale in between all the fan service.

DirtyBooks

I had a lot of negative feedback for the recent flashback part :\

Personally I thought you already had a good mix going on sketch

Villes Vill

Perhaps a DQ:N Tier that's a little more than just the "Basic access" for those who want to support you more for that comic? Ehh could be a dumb idea. Just a thought =w= *shrug*

Personally I really like that it's an actual thought out story and not just fan service pretending to be a comic. But that's just my two cents.