The Fall - Chapter 26

I get the feeling no matter what the ending Saber and Rin will probably wind up happy.

jmspikey

Sorry. In no scenario will Gerard come to regret his actions. Because let's face it, he not so much a character as he is a plot device. I wouldn't mind killing him off, to be sure, but I just don't think it's worthy. Depending on the ending, Shirou will either die, not realize what's up with Rin and Saber at all, or find out be happy with it.

IchaIchaSennin

Shit, I feel like you just took our previous comments and made us eat our own words. I thought the “second view point” would involve the car orgy, not an entirely second half. A chapter full of smut that pays of all of Sabers build up is great (also im a sucker for aheago descriptions so that was the best part for me). Props to you Icha, props indeed. I cannot wait to see what other smut scenes you have in mind and where this plot will go. Im assuming Sakura will be next?

Shadowsprinkles

you will chuck him hard, right? yeah, i'm sure you will. ugh, i hope in at least one of those endings somebody's face will get impaled by Hrunting. anyway, even though it really hurts me to see Rin and Saber going down in a bigger blaze than the Hindenburg, i applaud your dedication. you certainly don't loose yourself in endless exposition that bores the reader out of his mind. while the word count per chapter feels like less than many other fate fics out there the speed in which the plot actually moves forward exceeds most fics. the way you manage to make them rationalize their actions inside their own mind (even though under the influence of magecraft) is frighteningly effectiv and believable in a very twisted way. the path they walk on is truly destructive and fills me as a reader with a feeling of dread for the things to come. however, some of the ideas/ideals of the characters in this story are so utterly ridiculous to my ears that it makes me cringe hard sometimes. i also don't like how things seem to always go right for Gerard, so let's hope that he starts to get a bit more pressure/heat down the line instead of everything always going exactly the way he wants. I'd love for a Velvet/Emiya team up to establish at least an opposing force and threat to his scheming to spice things up a bit. normally smut is not my thing and i really resent some concepts your fiction presents at the very core, but i also really want to see how this story plays out, and at the end of the day i think this is the real challenge for any author, to make his reads engage with his work. i mean you even made me sign up for patron and give you money for something you clearly enjoy doing, so i guess you win in the end :D best wishes from germany. ps: english is not my first language but i hope i still managed to convey my deeply conflicted thoughts about your story in a understandable way.

The Good End will have Shirou quite happy with the state of things.

IchaIchaSennin

i mean by the time Saber is in too deep Rin can just reveal everything to Saber who would probably be too corrupt to back out.

jmspikey

So this is going to be like. Rin trying to hand saber's ass to NTRMC while Saber might try and seduce her way to him and hand Rin's ass to him. While unbeknownst to Saber. Rin is already a slut. Such a complicated master plan.

Eternity Smut

Thanks to a recently translated dojin, I want to see Saber becoming famous as as a Porn Star that loves to fuck horses.

OmegaS

I hope that at least one of the ending has Shirou just smile or something, knowing that the people he loves are happy, even if the happiness come from complete depravity, and in doing so totally slaps Rin in the face. I’m a total Shirou fanboy so seeing that would kill me... and also I can easily see it in his character. Since he has literally no self value, it’d be great to see Rin and Saber’s acts having no effect on him (and I realize it will more than likely not turn out this way, but it’d be pretty funny and rewarding lol).

Dragyr

I was asleep and woke up to this. At first I thought, it was a picture for ch 26. But nope, it's was ch 26 and holy shit was the pay out worth it. THIS is what we were talking about regarding a proper reward after a ton of build up. Can't wait for chapter 27 now.

IgnisHeart

and pulled my name out of your ass. I am simply going to not believe it. Don't try to convince me otherwise. :)

Loves2Spooge

But of course. I did not mean to imply otherwise. ;)

IchaIchaSennin

No. I pulled the names out of my ass.

IchaIchaSennin

Aren't we all? Lol

Jack Uldron

Okay, did you name one of those guys after me? You shouldn't have but I'm glad you did.

Loves2Spooge

What can I say? I'm an entertainer at heart. A pervert too, but mostly an entertainer.

IchaIchaSennin

Yes, but not quite. Remember, Saber's fall is going to be different. Their depravity will have different themes.

IchaIchaSennin

I'm assuming it's similar to when Rin fist acknowledge she was a whore in which she played around with the concept before just going nose diving into it.

jmspikey

Excellently played. Lead us all to believe we only got a tiny drop until the end of the month then a whole scene immediately after. *clap clap clap* well done

Jack Uldron

We're not done with Saber yet. Also, I'm glad you liked it.

IchaIchaSennin

Also enjoy how you still put some plot progression at the end there in having Saber admit she's a slut it's all down hill from here for her and uphill for us the readers.

jmspikey

Yep.

IchaIchaSennin

Now this is a payoff to all the build up having most of an entire chapter dedicated to smut ain't bad IF it's the pay off to multiple chapters of build up also yeah kinda surprising this popped up I'm assuming the 2nd chapter won't be up till towards the end of the month?

jmspikey