The Fall - Chapter 44 & 45
Added 2020-03-13 14:58:36 +0000 UTCHello everybody,
as usual, sorry for the long wait. Unfortunately, writing isn't just a matter of putting in the work, other wise I'd have doubled the count of words published by now. Sometimes I think I should just quit trying to keep any sort of release date. However, that would not be fair on you.
In light of that, I've decided to make at least weekly posts keep you updated with how things are going.
For the time being, here are Chapter 44 and Chapter 45 of The Fall.
Gamer Night is 50% complete as well.
In other news, I'm quarantined home due to COVID 19, which means that I can really focus on writing. Progress should be steady.
See you all soon.
EDIT: LINK FIXED. Thanks of the heads up.
Comments
That's a very specific sub fetish. There is room for that, but not in the main story.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-04-05 21:40:31 +0000 UTCStill you took the more interesting route of having their mentality pushed to the extreme instead of other probably simpler but cliche methods most recently being simply having Saber be broken by her foray into interracial sex.
jmspikey
2020-04-05 21:32:59 +0000 UTCWouldn't make much sense otherwise, would it?
IchaIchaSennin
2020-04-05 21:26:43 +0000 UTCAlso noticed both endings push their respective mentality to the extreme
jmspikey
2020-04-05 21:24:44 +0000 UTCThere is no such a thing as "it can't get any worse".
IchaIchaSennin
2020-04-05 21:22:16 +0000 UTCThat's rough plus it also comes with the fact that she once again fails in her attempt at creating her version of a utopia since it's kinda hard to convert people to your way if thinking as a mindless doll. Kinda interesting how even if this kind of story you can still pull out BAD ENDS.
jmspikey
2020-04-05 21:18:56 +0000 UTCSaber's BAD END would be the complete transformation in a sex toy. I don't mean that in just "living for sex". I really mean trading her consciousness and becoming a life-like sex doll with barely enough intelligence to follow basic instructions but couldn't even tie her own shoes. Similarly her body would appear to be made of plastic and she would be completely passive outside of sex. They could put her facing the wall for a month and she would just stand there permanently.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-04-05 21:10:14 +0000 UTCI understand Rin's BAD END her entire goal is to become the worlds biggest slut that men would give anything to sleep with so being reduced so a free use commodity at a men's club with her reputation being a cumdump makes sense but what about Saber?
jmspikey
2020-04-03 11:35:23 +0000 UTCSo i was going through The Falls Archives when i got to Rin's BAD ENDING and it got me thinking what would have been Sabers BAD END ? The way she has been developed doesn't seem to leave anyway for her to get one since she basically already sleeps with anyone no matter what not even charging for it like Rin does.
jmspikey
2020-04-03 10:57:55 +0000 UTCWhile I personally prefer Saber debasing herself, this is good too.
OmegaS
2020-03-13 16:13:29 +0000 UTCFixed. Thanks.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-03-13 15:11:10 +0000 UTCFixed. Thanks.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-03-13 15:11:06 +0000 UTCFixed. Thanks.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-03-13 15:11:02 +0000 UTCURL typo for Chapter 44 link: you forgot the comma after "https", it's causing it to divert to some other site. (Works once I manually added it, though.)
Benjamin Lawton
2020-03-13 15:05:50 +0000 UTCLink to ch44 does not seem to work
jmspikey
2020-03-13 15:04:17 +0000 UTCLink to 44 isn't working, while 45 works fine.
2Lazy2Name
2020-03-13 15:03:29 +0000 UTC
