Gamer Night - Chapter 55
Added 2020-04-30 20:47:22 +0000 UTCHere's Chapter 55, as promised.
I took a different direction than initially intended with this. I didn't want to make Ryoko's relationship with Shirou just another notch in his belt, so I decided to work another angle. I won't spoiler it, just read it and let me know what you think.
This is only just a snipped of what's about to come.
Anyhow, I hope you enjoy it.
See you all soon.
Comments
You know, I honestly thought we were going to see some pegging when I read the Lesbian was getting some toys to fuck our protagonist with. Not sure how to feel about not seeing it.
Trevor Ritzke
2022-08-24 22:25:53 +0000 UTCBy the way you forgot to add the 10 point in charisma he got from making saeko his slave.
R754
2020-05-06 00:52:00 +0000 UTCThat hot but cruel chapter, to end there.
R754
2020-05-06 00:49:57 +0000 UTCI mean Mikado isn't like Saeko or Taiga who where inexperienced in sexual acts so its understandable that she would take the reigns this time similarly i expect Yoruichi wouldn't be overwhelmed easily by Shirou (unless she has a submissive kink)
jmspikey
2020-05-05 02:09:42 +0000 UTCmeh femdom is pretty mid but it's fine, it's nice to have some variety
Brojo's StrangeJourney
2020-05-03 09:27:49 +0000 UTCI'm glad you found it to your liking. I took a gambit with this chapter. Not everyone enjoys reading a story where the protagonist is sexually submissive, however I think this was a much needed change of pace. Mikado relationship to Shirou will be that of a researcher with her specimen, or at least that's what she's going to tell herself to keep indulging in it.
IchaIchaSennin
2020-05-01 14:17:04 +0000 UTCI understand and I'm sorry you feel that way. Unfortunately, different people have different kinks and with Shirou having several partners they are bound to show up. However, short of a BAD END this is the level of BDSM you can expect from this story and of course not from every character (though some toys might come into play).
IchaIchaSennin
2020-05-01 14:09:37 +0000 UTCWell it was not what I had been expecting and I suspected that when I read post... nonetheless when I got into it, I found myself... disappointed... it's your style of writing, and scene was written down very well to smallest detail, your level didn't drop, yet I couldn't really get into reading at all, I can't say more than mention, the thing I liked the most in whole thing were the doubts that Shirou had about whole thing as it corresponds is nature, but whole rest of scene, obviously it's your artistic freedom to play it out way you want... but I honestly I don't enjoy direction in which Shirou and Mikado are going, it was pretty much thought I had through most of this chapter. Which was bit of double low for me since I had anticipated those scenes for a while now, sorry but that's how I feel about it.
Kreyn
2020-05-01 09:17:29 +0000 UTCSo, while I didn't come in expecting it to go this direction, I ended up enjoying it a great deal. It's kind of nice, seeing Shirou enjoy a bit of variety, and letting Ryouko express her very-different personality. After all, the ideal ending here is for she and he to have an actual relationship, rather than just fucking once and oops, she's addicted. This is a key part of that. Also, having sensitivity-increasing sex gel is nice for his other lady-friends, questions of poison resistance aside. I admit, when the bullet vibes first showed up, I was expecting prostate stimulation, and as someone both fascinated and repulsed by that particular fetish, I had some complex feelings to wade through when she instead just went for the tip. Kind of hope they get some ball massage, with or without the vibrators, before moving onto the main course. And I also appreciated a foray into excessive cum splattering all over a lady, which was something that I was introduced to relatively early on and so is something I like. It's not a bad observation, either, that Shirou is a bit submissive naturally. Wouldn't mind she and Saeko teaming up on him in the future, if only because I think Saeko gets off as much on teasing and dominating him as on being dominated, and it's something she hasn't gotten to enjoy for a while thanks to the way sex skill increases work. And, again, the hopeful end point here is everyone (including, of course, Tearju) getting along in a big happy fucking family rather than some of them just being side chicks or, as you put it, "notches on his belt." I sometimes have mixed feelings about the slow pace of this story, but as Ryouko pointed out this chapter, he could have a huge harem of addicted sex slaves if he wanted. He doesn't because he instead wants sex to be something Shirou does in intimate relationships with people he loves, and that makes everyone involved happy. So, if I gotta be patient for the various long-telegraphed subplots to begin bearing fruit, so be it.
SpectralTime
2020-05-01 03:54:07 +0000 UTCThat was somehow both smut and a teaser for such. Though if the artwork is any indication, Shirou will have Mikado bouncing on his dick by the end of their session. Of course, that doesn't mean Mikado can't have some fun of her own before that happens. Icha, could we perhaps get a bit of an idea about what manner of toys she intends to use on on Shirou while he's still bound with those straps?
2Lazy2Name
2020-05-01 02:43:46 +0000 UTCChapter makes logical sense and both Ryoko and Shirou were in character. As for the content, I didn’t like it at all. This is easily the worst chapter of the story for me. A pure smut chapter based around kinks I dislike equals no fun reading. Hoping for a twist otherwise I’m not looking forward to anymore smut with Ryoko ever again. That said, thanks for all your effort! I’m still enjoying the actual plot at least. Also, this chapter is labeled as “FGNESE” and not “FGNSE” if that matters to you.
Slingtap
2020-05-01 01:05:22 +0000 UTCWhile kerry had a little harem, he definitely didn't have shirous problems
foza
2020-04-30 21:48:03 +0000 UTC
