It's time to play ch.92
Added 2023-03-28 17:57:03 +0000 UTC
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Why is Harry so immature? You’ve written 90 chapters and he’s still shown almost no growth at all. I don’t think anyone enjoys the awkward, insecure immature depiction of Harry. This version of Harry could never have multiple partners who are 100% out of his league based on his characterization. I know you can write better than this, Dominan proves that. It doesn’t make sense that you’re making Harry so deficient in almost every way. I just wish you would write him or depict him as someone with actual confidence and emotional intelligence. If there isn’t any growth what’s the point of the story?
Robert
2023-03-28 20:50:12 +0000 UTC
