Chapters 199-200: The Art of the Blade
Added 2024-03-04 18:00:06 +0000 UTCComments
The description of Nicks sword reminds me of Orcrist from the hobbit. With the exception of the pommel jewel they sound very alike.
Ocean
2026-01-08 02:03:50 +0000 UTCThanks.
Bryan Dickerson
2024-03-11 21:02:57 +0000 UTCAlso at the 7th Paragraph you wrote 'foraged' instead of 'forged'
Ekko
2024-03-11 20:59:19 +0000 UTCI really like how you write Nick learning Swordmanship, it has a certain weight to it that can often be lost when writing. Also I'm just as eager to see the sword repaired as Nick. Tftc
Ekko
2024-03-11 20:57:06 +0000 UTC
