PRiNCESSViLLE COMiC:: THE UNSPOKEN RULE!
Added 2020-04-23 00:53:16 +0000 UTCUPDATE:: Fixed the Grammatical Error in Frame 1 and the Speech Bubble in Frame 5
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Dear Pink & Fluffi Patrons...
I'm very happy to be able to post the PrincessVille page for Xul's Contest Winning Suggestion. :)
Some sissies try to retain their masculinity in PrincessVille, however the Unspoken Rule is always there dangling over their Pink & Fluffi Heads... ;D
Thank you to Celtic Minstrel, Ben4321 & SendtheLove for your naming Suggestions... I ended up going with a mixture of Celtic Minstrel & SendtheLoves suggestion of 'Glitzi'. :)
Creating the linework for this page with my Pencil & Fine-Liners was a really nice & very welcome change of pace. :)
I really hope you all Enjoy how the page turned out. :D:D:D
Stay Pink, Fluffi & Safe...
K@T ^^
Comments
Nah, you're not rambling, ^^ and like I said, I still enjoyed it. I think I can relate to your interpretation as well, maybe sympathize with how overwhelmed a person must feel in such a situation. Besides, I'm very fond of my ability to adopt a sissy-persona when the situation allows it and then slip back into my other self again as I please, perhaps that smack-dab permanence is what prevents me from appreciating something like that? Which is strange, because I don't mind things being added like for example, a significantly sized pair of implants. Ah well, it's fun to analyze why things impact us certain ways. And is that not what art is about, bringing out emotion and reflection? It's just more proof you're not making wanton smut and actually making art here. I'll just make sure not to misbehave in Princessville and be an attentive sissy, so I'd allowed some time to get used to alterations ;p
Richort12
2020-05-13 21:45:23 +0000 UTCThat's ok Roxi, I can understand such alterations aren't to everyones tastes, I feel a large part of the dislike for many in terms of it being a story element in sissy stories in general tends to come down to it being an element which feels so absolute. Because of this it can have a tendency within the context of a sissy story to feel like it completely skip over all the interesting psychological factors the character can & would feel both prior to & afterwards... Sorry Roxi, I feel like I'm rambling while not really saying anything. :-s As for the breasts, a Sissy has to earn their Pink & Fluffi Full Sissy status. ^^
K@T
2020-05-13 20:25:41 +0000 UTCI'm not usually a particular fan of the absolute removal or extreme alteration of genitalia (not sure why, might be psychological as a guy) but I do like the idea that they'd eventually get to earn breasts as a reward for performance. Goes to show there's always something to enjoy in a K@Tscandy work ^^
Richort12
2020-05-13 12:03:51 +0000 UTCThank you Josh, I'm really pleased your enjoying the stories & the artstyle. :D
K@T
2020-04-29 12:46:00 +0000 UTCI am loving where this is going, your art style keeps getting better and better!
Josh
2020-04-29 10:14:49 +0000 UTCWell that's just the natural sparkle of the Permanent Make-Up, But I'm sure we can find some Strawberry Cock Slurping Lipgloss around here somewhere! ;) Also I don't know if you received my previous comment, but if you did want to read the 'script' message me here on patreon with the email address you'd like me to send it to.
K@T
2020-04-24 13:36:58 +0000 UTCSo that's what strawberry cock slurping glitter pink™ lipgloss looks like
Xul
2020-04-24 09:20:41 +0000 UTC"Thank You for the Phrase which set this comic page in Motion." ... ooooOOOOOOhhH!
Xul
2020-04-24 09:19:16 +0000 UTCEeps, this lil sissy better tread carefully then, Miss K@T, thank You for the warning! :D <3 xoxo Word probably missed it because it only looks at individual words, not whole sentences. I would recommend Grammarly for a spell check. It has a really good freeware option. And You're very welcome! XOXO https://www.grammarly.com/
Roro
2020-04-23 23:47:05 +0000 UTCI can email you the script if you would like to see it, but my Comic Scripts tend to be very jumbled, messy and even lacking text which I've included on the final pages because of last minute edits. If you're still interested, send me a private message with the preferred email address.
K@T
2020-04-23 17:02:28 +0000 UTCI'm really happy and relived to to hear you enjoyed it Xul. :D Thank You for the Phrase which set this comic page in Motion. :D Wow that dream sounds so amazingly, I really wish my dreams were so indepth and devious. :D Maybe you can include the Fairy Outfit in some of your future dreams. ^^
K@T
2020-04-23 16:57:19 +0000 UTCI really like that psychological prison element!. 3 a4 pages huh? Any chance we could get a glipse of that? Wouldn't hurt to have long form stories to go with them would it?
Xul
2020-04-23 16:37:25 +0000 UTCNo, Your actually right, I didn't realise I had cut out ALL references to Glitzi's name. :-s ... I'd switched a lot of 'Sparkles and Glitzi's speech bubble text and in the process when changing pronouns I must have cut the name references entirely... HOWEVER, Its PrincessVille, so much like 'Candy' one of the technicians at the Prissy Princess Poodle Palace Salon & The Other un-named Salon Employee in the previous PrincessVille page, they are all characters & residents in the PrincessVille World, so they aren't just nameless interchangable background figures. :)
K@T
2020-04-23 16:32:57 +0000 UTCYou mentioned using Glitzi, but I don't see it. Am I missing something?
Sendahlove
2020-04-23 16:20:12 +0000 UTCThank You Mike, I really am so pleased you like it. :D As for the 'What Happens to Them Later' aspect, I would very much like to be able to return to some of these characters in the future as the PrincessVille World Builds up. :D
K@T
2020-04-23 14:40:07 +0000 UTCAlpha Status Gone!!! All it takes is one moment of weakness or exposure and the Dominant Personalities can begin to circle a potential sissy or bimbo. ^^ Thank you for mentioning the grammatical mistake Roro, I'm not quite sure how I (or Word) missed it, so Thank You. :D I've now updated the page. :):):)
K@T
2020-04-23 14:21:17 +0000 UTCI’m pleased the story was enjoyable STL, as for Wordy, I don’t know what you mean. :-p To be honest I’m genuinely amazed I managed to fit all the text in on this page, although I did have to cut a couple of paragraphs, as all the text amounted to Three A4 pages of Scripting. ^^ So I’m quite amazed I managed to fit it all. :) The Labia lips premise was because all the previous PrincessVille Pages had already emphasized ‘Big Lips’ in one way or another, so I wanted to zig, instead of another zag. ;) I’m pleased the ‘short hair’ helped provide an element of identity with the sissy still being the same person... I understand what you’re saying regarding the hair root colouring, although in this case the solid colouring of the hair was quite simply to do with the comic page format. Sedated for 12 weeks, was more to emphasise that James/ Josie hadn’t really been fully conscious for the past 3 months. So the reaction to having no Penis is the first time he’d actually realised... The reason I said 12 weeks, is because realistically 2-3 months is kind of the minimum recovery time for someone going through SRS... Granted at that stage of recovery there would be scars, but this is the comic world, so ‘all the scars have magically faded into obscurity’. ^^ But this time lapse also helps explain, the hair, and the many hours of facial hair removal & permanent makeup application etc... And Xul was right, the lack of breasts was to do with the sissy feeling inadequate both on the stage and around all the other dancers. With the promise of ‘Breasts’, being used as an incentive to become a better ‘Fairy Stripper’... The thing is when I’m writing these comics, I’m also trying to consider the larger aspects of thePrincessVille World & (Fairy Lounge Business). As if Lady Nightingale had turned him into a beautiful Bimbo, there’s nothing stopping him from just leaving PrincessVille with a Free Makeover. As in PrincessVille (unlike Amsterdamned) the Residents can come and go, so it’s up to the Dominants to make sure the submissives don’t feel like they want to leave or like they can’t leave.
K@T
2020-04-23 14:18:03 +0000 UTCI'm really happy you liked it Celtic and I'm very grateful for your Perfect naming suggestion, Thank You. :D:D
K@T
2020-04-23 13:52:25 +0000 UTCXul, I think I had more issues with the 12 week sedation than the actually lack of boobjob. I mean if it was like 24 hours or even a 3 day lapse in time I wouldn't have given any thought about the lack of boobjob. But I get what you are saying about shame of being stuck and the fear of feeling like there's no return.
Sendahlove
2020-04-23 12:05:47 +0000 UTCLove this so much. Love the way you name things, pussy boi pink, Josie jiggly lips. I also once had a dream that when woke up wrote a whole story around. It involved a bet with a mistress that if I could land a one night stand with a chick at a club i'd get to fuck the mistress. But the mistress got to make rules every hour and pick the venue, so she picks a gay club. The first rule is that every time a guy comes up and flirts with you you have to flirt back enthusiastically and welcome all of his advances. So I'd be getting somewhere with chatting up a girl then a guy would come flirt and I'd flirt back and the girl would figure I'm gay and lose interest. The second rule was that I had to change clothes into a sissy outfit. The third rule was that I had to do a gay dance on stage to a madonna song with a bunch of hunks as all the straight girls in the club watched. Then one of the guys who started flirting really rushed things, had to dirty dance then took me to the bathroom to fuck me in the bathroom stalls as I could hear hte new years count down through the wall and came as I lose the bet at the stroke of mid night. So I lovedthe fiary outfit he had to dance in front of everyone with. Great work xoxox
Xul
2020-04-23 11:39:17 +0000 UTCin my head cannon they skipped the boobs on purpose to use as incentive. Once you have a vagina then there's no going back, you may as well sprint forward. This way he's stuck inbetween worlds still and people can still laugh at him for his lack of masculinity. Once you have the whole look it's less embarresing because people are none the wise like the other strippers.
Xul
2020-04-23 11:32:43 +0000 UTCI love it. I always hope there will be some sort of "what happend to them later", for your pricessville characters.
Mika W
2020-04-23 10:42:24 +0000 UTCOh my, wasn't super safe afterall! There goes the alpha status out the window! *giggles* <3 xoxo What a rush! Teensy tiny spelling thing in the second to last bubble, it should read: 'when we're talking to a sissy', not where. But is just a widdle thing!
Roro
2020-04-23 08:40:42 +0000 UTCWickedly clever premise of lips, and the play on words to include the labia. The story was enjoyable even if it was wordy, which I've grown to expect from your writing. 💘 The Fairy costume was very well designed K@T. My only issue was the coloring of hair lacked texture. I actually liked the short style as it gave us readers a clear indication that James/Josie were the same person despite the altered body. I would've liked to see more blended coloring on hair, perhaps some dark greyish roots to hot pink and gradually lighter pink at the tips. One other thing that sorta confused or was contradictory to me was that the protagonist underwent Sex Reassignment Surgery, yet no boobjob? I would think the latter would come first!? I mean WTF...12 weeks of sedation should've been enough for a set of boobs! 😋😜😁
Sendahlove
2020-04-23 05:59:55 +0000 UTCI'm touched that you liked my suggestion!! Really like how this turned out. Well done!
Celtic Minstrel
2020-04-23 04:07:05 +0000 UTCNo dream spying... On this occasion. ^^ I'm really happy you like it Sailor Bear Zodar and thank you for your kind words. :D
K@T
2020-04-23 02:49:53 +0000 UTCHave you been looking into my dreams? I love this ever so much, truly another wonderfully inspiring piece😻
Sailor Bear Zodar
2020-04-23 02:20:09 +0000 UTCThank You Nick, I really happy & relieved you like it. :)
K@T
2020-04-23 01:49:58 +0000 UTCI'm sorry to hear you didn't really like it Ben. It’s a story line I’d been looking to explore for quite a few years now, as years ago I remember reading a ‘supposed’ Real Life Account of a sissy who was ‘Dominanted’ and had their penis removed through SRS, Only to end up so passive and obedient that the Mistress found it hard to punish him for anything, as he became an extremely passive & obedient zombie to Her every command, never talking back, never disagreeing, just always following Her Orders without question... Maybe I should have leaned into the mindless zombie aspect a bit more. Maybe I’m just over-thinking these stories and should just make them simple with one or two sentences in each frame.
K@T
2020-04-23 01:37:54 +0000 UTCFantastic work as always!
LatexDollyNikki
2020-04-23 01:37:29 +0000 UTCi don't know, somehow, the thrill is missing, it can't be a sissy without a sissy clitty!:/ Strage, the first Princessvill Comic strip i don't fully Like!:S
ben4321
2020-04-23 01:11:22 +0000 UTC
