Honest Kiro

Well, we will have 4 more remakes yet, but to break this up a bit, I will make a different publication, many of you know Kiro from Patreon, but this time, I will show Kiro "fan", I will comment on what I think of each story, comment on them, and how it was to put these stories together.

To begin, I will start with Magic of the Nine.

https://www.patreon.com/posts/39731867

I remember when Zero sent me the story script, I thought "Cool, I liked this story, it looks like fun", half a second later, I thought "How am I going to make this story?". Because if you notice, Magic of the Nine is a fantasy story, with medieval environments, so I was very worried at the time, and to make me even more worried, Zero was doing more chapters, if I'm not mistaken, he had some 4 chapters ready, it scared me a lot at the time.

Maybe you think "So Kiro doesn't like the story?". Well, I love this story, it was a challenge to do at the beginning, because I didn't have my new computer yet, the scenes were heavy, and complicated to do, but at the same time, it helped me and a lot to improve, if click on the link in the first chapter, and compare it with the image above, you will notice the difference, it is a story, which is almost a year old, there are still several scenarios that will be a challenge, but I just love this story. And I am happy to accept these challenges ahead.

I will avoid giving notes to the stories, because I don't want to compare them, but Magic of the Nine is one of my favorites, because my favorite fetish is "time stop", and there are many beautiful women in this story, who are frozen, and have a very good balance between the story, and the moments of sex, for that reason, it is one of the stories that I like the most.

Now going to the second victim, Crimson Gorgon.

https://www.patreon.com/posts/39785353

Crimson Gorgon... I remember when I started creating this story together with Carnivore. I was very excited because he was a Tier Medusa - one of the first - and to know that there were people who would pay for my stories… Well, I was very excited.  He even sent me this:

I, a newbie, starting to create a story, received it and the moment I saw it, I thought "What do I do !?" But luckily, he sent it to me at night, after a good rest.  The next day, I started creating the characters and in the end, everything worked out.  I found it quite amusing, because he gave the idea of the story and I wrote a script for a narrative story. He liked it, so the first of many chapters was created.

Now about the story: I admit that right at the beginning, I was a little worried, because I didn't like petrification at the time. Well, it can be said that nowadays, if I like petrification, it is because of the stories of Crimson Gorgon.  I think this story is incredible, and I have a certain affection for it, because both CG and Maria were OC, that Carnivore gave the idea, and I made them, and I had a lot of fun with the story.  The conversations that I had and that I still have with Carnivore about building it; these made me like it more and more, which made me like petrification more.

About the story in general, there were some challenges, but again, I didn't have a good computer at the time, and the changes in scenes, and characters, it was always a little heavy for my notebook.

So yes, I really like the stories of CG, a story that started a long time ago, which are still being released today, and I, like all of you, am very curious to know what direction it is going to take.

NOTE: CG was supposed to be a witch, but because I read it wrong, she ended up being a Gorgon, XD.

And then we have our third victim, Gorgon Gameshow

https://www.patreon.com/posts/41245252

And then we have Gorgon Gameshow, a story with several OCs - Yes, almost all the characters in the story were OCs because at the time, Tyty had sent me a list of characters, their personalities, and based on that I would create the characters. I admit that I had fun creating the characters. There was a character, who in this case, was the first to be petrified - Rebeca? Now the name has eluded me.  Anyway, I had an extra incentive when working to make her, because of all the participants, she was the one I had liked the most. And then, she was the first to lose.

Being the first chapter, I admit that I was a little upset about it.  Basically, I was hoping for her to win and when she lost right away, I thought. "Okay, there are more girls, now I'm going to hope for this one to win", and well ... She lost in the second chapter, being petrified.  I admit that I thought Tyty was doing this on purpose, but I hadn't commented on anything for him.  Well, I did a test: this time, I wasn't cheering, I just thought "Let's root for this girl, if she loses, this is already slutty". And, well, to my surprise, she really lost, and since then, I stopped cheering for the characters XD.

Now about the story: When I saw the idea of ​​Tyty, I thought it could be something generic.  You know how in anime, where the story has no purpose, and out of nowhere, a tournament appears?  This was more or less what I thought, but Tyty showed me that I was absolutely wrong, and damn it, I really liked the story.  When I read the last chapter, I had a feeling of emptiness, as if something good had just ended.  It just happens to me, when I read a book for a long time and I want to read more, so yes, Tyty's story was incredible.  He managed to grab  me and to my surprise, he made an incredible story using only 15 pages a week.

Overall, I loved Tyty's story, and I'm looking forward to what he's going to do for the second season. (A side note, I heard that Tyty knows how to write stories.  Who knows, maybe one day he does a written version of the Gorgon Gameshow? Usually I don't read petrification stories, but this one I would definitely read.)

In Pixiv, this next story is called "Freeze Company".  Now, for the 4th victim, we will have the story of Smash (The character known as Kira).

https://www.patreon.com/posts/41466377

To the surprise of many, this was the first chapter in Kira's history, yes, and this chapter was not done by Smash, but by someone else (Now, I don't remember who it was). Basically, Smash liked this story so much that he wanted a continuation and to my surprise, right after that he won the "Monday's request". With that, he made a continuation.

Smash felt the taste of power - he was like many people, who thought something like "I don't know how to make stories" or "It is very difficult to create them".  He asked for help from other people who knew how to create stories, and he saw that it was not so hard to create them.  One day he asked me "Kiro, is there a way to open a new slot for the Tier Medusa story?". Luckily, I was already thinking about opening a new vacancy for this Tier, and soon after, he became a new Tier Medusa.

If I'm not mistaken, it was only in the first 2 or 3 chapters that he asked for help.  After that, he started writing them on his own and that made me very happy, because he had commented that he didn't know how to write stories.  Now he makes amazing chapters, and even better, I managed to bring this to life.  He was happy with his story and I was also happy, since we have many time stops on it, XD.

In general, I like this story too and Kira is a great character.  Well, there are a few times when she messes with Kris frozen in time.  I’m not a big fan of these because I don't like to see men frozen in time, only women, but that's just a small detail. Overall, the story as a whole is incredible.

Before going to the next victim, I just wanted to comment on something, there are some stories, which have not been made in a long time, in this case, a long time without a new chapter, so I will not comment on them.

https://www.patreon.com/posts/41479005

The ninja cat for example

And then we have our next victim, Deal With The Collector.

https://www.patreon.com/posts/42177334

Asfrmaster, as his name says, is a master at creating Asfr stories.  A long time ago, before I even started publishing on Pixiv, I had already seen his stories and then one day, he appeared, taking the Tier loudly and wanting a story.  At first I was worried, because I had already seen his stories, and I thought it might be difficult to create it.  He asked me to remake a story he had on Deviantart, and when I saw it, I was a little worried, because she seemed to be something difficult to create.

Again, I had a new challenge ahead and although I had some fears, it was at that moment that I had started to learn to use filters in the stories, because I needed to improve my stories and I felt like I certainly had. As the story progressed, I was able to improve, and I was enjoying both my progress and the story itself, but then something unexpected happened.

Asfrmaster was between choosing the ending to the story and a vote was taken, with the dark route as the winner.  I think Asfrmaster realized that I was a little upset about it, because he had commented that if I wanted to, we could go on the light route.  Even so, I continued on the dark route.

I admit, at the time I was really a little upset, because I could feel Chole's feeling, which was despair.  I'm not the type who likes Dark stories, and that time, it left a little bad taste for me.

Some may think "Kiro, this is silly, or cool on your part". Well, it was that I really wasn't used to it.  It was something like that when you discover your fetish, you don't start researching adult things, but you see them in cartoons, films, silly things... just more in the future, you start to find adult content.  In this case here, it was something like that.  I didn't like it very much at first, and then, I got used to it.  Nowadays, I love the Asfrmaster stories.

So to sum it all up, it was a mixture of love and hate, but over time, I started to like them. It was just the beginning, which was something out of the style that I normally did (Remember, I am the creator of the Neeko story, I like to do silly things). Today, I think the beginning of the story is incredible.  So Asfrmaster, if you’re reading this part, keep writing your amazing stories, because I’m eager to know what’s going to happen in the next few chapters.  I just wanted to live up to the title of this publication, if I'm being honest, and while I didn't like it very much before, now I love your stories, XD.

I would like to comment also on the other stories - Witch Hazel, for example, but she only has few chapters yet.  There are also several other stories, but there are two chapters, or they are written by me (Or someone does the script, but still is on top of an idea of mine, so it doesn’t make much sense to comment on it, such as the Collector’s story, which Tarrot and I did). For others, the story is very new, with less than 5 chapters. With that, it is a little complicated to judge it.

For this reason, the various other stories that have not been commented on here, I hope you understand, but let me say that next year, for sure, I will comment on them, XD.

I hope you enjoyed this publication, it took some work to do, so please comment on your favorite stories, and why you like them, and soon, we will have some more remake publications, XD.