Sense Chapter 004 - Preparation
Added 2018-12-08 00:22:34 +0000 UTCWooh, finally catching up on chapters! Not sure I like the title of this one though, so if anyone can think of a better name, let me know! <3
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...sometime she'd decided to do... should be "something"
Aaron Canning
2019-03-07 10:19:28 +0000 UTCThanks! I like Outpost better, and I fixed that sentence. ^_^
Jay - Siphon
2018-12-08 01:03:08 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Maybe "Outpost", or "Digging In" would be good titles? Also the double negative in this sentence tripped me up a bit as i was reading initally. "It wasn't like she hadn't slept terriblly last night ..."
Dax
2018-12-08 00:54:12 +0000 UTC
