Chapter 22 - A little bit, at least
Added 2019-04-12 03:06:57 +0000 UTCHey guys! I've been sick and a little bit stressed about book 2 release, plus this chapter is... making me do more world building that I had planned out. However, Book 2 is releasing tonight! I'm super excited, and if any of you can leave reviews, I would be forever grateful for the boost. <3 Thanks for your support!
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Comments
In one of the last paragraphs Camille is talking about how Jade’s body has stabilised, with the paragraph ending in Jade’s head. There does seem to be missing quotations when Camille finishes talking, however.
Aaron Canning
2019-04-19 06:24:32 +0000 UTCYou can type lying down ;). Get well soon kidda. On a comment note, this chapter provides a little more context to our MC. It does seem a little short and I am intrigued as to how Jade copes with what I hope are Misogyny, racism that she has had absolutely no experience of yet.
Mark Taylor
2019-04-12 06:41:24 +0000 UTC
