Out For Blood
Added 2020-04-26 23:53:07 +0000 UTCMob enforcer Amber is chasing down informant Dani and has cornered her in her warehouse apartment block down town. After a stairway chase, Dani makes a mistake that will prove fatal. Wounded, she makes it into her apartment. After landing a hit on Dani, Amber become over-confident - which proves to be a fatal mistake.
I'm really excited to share this with you. I shot this just before our lockdown started and I managed to incorporate a few elements and suggestions. Firstly, there is a longer build up than normal and I use a few different locations. There's a bit more attitude in both characters, rather than being just victims (although there is still much more scope to make future characters even more badass). It was also suggested it would be cool for someone to get wounded then try to escape, which is in the video. And there's a few elements requested by specific patrons, such as Amber's shirt becoming untucked, Amber convulsing before she dies, and Amber's white socks, and Dani's blazer. I hope you guys who requested those are happy.
As always let me know how I did in the comments or via DM.
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Sadly deleted. I'll make sure there's plenty of sweariness when I get back filming :D
Grindhouse North
2020-04-27 13:56:50 +0000 UTCWould love to see the un edited version with the swearing if you still have it
Joseph Hutchins
2020-04-27 12:23:46 +0000 UTCYes, you're absolutely right - on both counts. As I mentioned in a previous reply, we did a little bit of dialogue at the end - mainly just swearing. -but it just didn't sound convincing so it got edited out. Your point about the death throes being too long is interesting. I tend to let the Patreon edits run a little looser - just to try and give you patrons more value, I guess. But I do worry that that impacts on the pacing and makes the videos feel bloated. I might do a poll on this and see how others feel. Thanks again for the feedback
Grindhouse North
2020-04-27 12:21:52 +0000 UTCGreat video! Two suggestions: there aren't dialogues; I think it's better if the actresses have a few lines to act before and during the shooting. This helps to better describe the characters: I think, however, that this choice was motivated by the limited time available. Second, I find that the death throes are very long, a little at the expense of the actual action: I suggest to let some time pass between one shot and the next one, in order to let the action breathe and to allow time for the models to react to each shot.
Dirtyharry
2020-04-27 11:10:46 +0000 UTC
