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Riley Gendreau
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Body Swapped with the Class Goth Girl V (Ea)

“Dear Raven, sorry again this entry is so long, but there was a lot to catch up with since I forgot to write in it this week. So where was I? Oh right, After the confrontation on saturday, the rest of the day your parents and I avoided each other.”

“Sunday was mostly the same, but I did hear your parents on the phone calling to fire a ton of people, so I believe they’re taking the steps to change into the parents you deserve, just in their strange little way.”

“So onto Monday, the day I decided to take on your bullies.” It was early in the morning when Susan came into Raven’s room and woke me up. She helped me get ready to go to school and happily picked out a nice black dress for me to wear.

Along with that, she managed to fulfill a special request I had, which was a pair of boots that would really hurt, say If I kicked someone in the leg. She found some knee-high boots in Raven’s closet, ones that were a bit heavy but perfect.

Once I was all dressed, I went downstairs to eat breakfast, which, since the chef was fired and likely fleeing the country, I wasn’t sure what to expect. I never expected to see your mother cooking in the kitchen.

Of course, it was clear it had been some time since she last cooked anything, as the kitchen was filled with smoke and the food she was cooking was burnt. She even started a fire, which I had to put out, as she had no idea what to do and panicked a bit.

I’m not super proud of it, but I’m just as bad at cooking and started a few fires while trying to cook for my sister, so she taught me how to deal with a fire, and I was able to show that to Raven’s mother. After that, the two of us fanned the kitchen out.

Once the smoke was gone, I was about to head out and go to school, maybe pick up some fruit on the way, but Raven’s dad suddenly came running through the front door with a bag. He seemed excited and wanted to show me the contents but stopped when he smelled smoke.

Raven’s mom explained the fire blunder, and Raven’s dad immediately held my shoulders and asked if I was okay. I move his hands off my shoulders and tell him I’m fine; I didn’t hurt his daughter’s body at all. He then looks a bit disappointed.

Then, to my surprise, he told me that he was glad about that but then asked me if I was mentally okay and that if the stress of the fire was too much, I didn’t have to go to school. I’ll admit, I was a bit taken aback by the fact he was concerned about my well-being, not just Raven’s body.

So much so I was silent for a moment, but when I snapped out of it, I told him it was okay. I even laughed and told him what I told Raven’s mom, that I myself had nearly burned down a kitchen before, so it wasn’t my first rodeo.

Raven’s dad smiled and said that was sort of good to hear, not about burning the kitchen down, but that I was okay. He then pulled the stuff he got out of the bag, and again to my surprise, it was a large fruit bowl.

He told me he went to the store and picked it out. He said he wasn’t sure which ones I’d like, or that Raven would like, so for now he’d just get a ton, and I, or Raven when she gets back, can tell him, and they’ll get that from now on.

I was nearly drooling over myself seeing the fruit; it looked so good, so fresh. I took one of the bowls from him right away with a big smile on my face. I then told Raven’s parents I was going to eat it as I went to school. I then walked to the doorway of the kitchen but stopped suddenly.

I turned back and looked at them both. I thanked them for all of that, for trying to cook and getting me the fruit, and most importantly, the effort they’re putting in for Raven’s sake. It truly meant a lot to me. I then turned and left before they could say another word.

I enjoyed my delicious fruit bowl on my way to school, and when I arrived, I was full of fruit and energy to commence the first part of my get-rid-of-the-bullies plan, which I’m dubbing “Gothic Revenge: The Dealer Gets Dealt!!” I hope Raven enjoys that title.

The target of this story is Suzy Sullivan. Much like the other two bullies, she’s quite popular in the school, but not from good looks or being super smart. No, she’s popular because she sells drugs to the other students.

I’ve never bought any from her, but I do happen to know how she does it without being caught. She uses an old closed-off bathroom as the dealing site, and she stores the drugs she sells under a loose floor tile, so if a teacher catches her in there, she doesn't actually have anything on her.

Now I could just rat on her, but if she’s caught in the bathroom, they can’t exactly pin the drugs on her since she doesn’t have them on her. No, what I need is for her to think I might send the teachers, so she runs and grabs her stash and tries to relocate it.

So when the time eventually comes for them to find Raven and bully her, they find me waiting inside the abandoned bathroom that Suzy uses for her deals. Suzy asks me what I was doing inside there, and I very obviously lie and say I was hiding from them.

I then put my hands behind my back and slowly walk past Suzy while saying she should be careful, that some of the floor tiles are loose. I then walk up to the other two bullies and look them in the eyes.

Before they could grab me, say something, or do anything, I asked them if they liked my boots. They seemed confused and then said they were hideous. I laughed and said that’s a fair opinion but then told them why I liked them.

I kept eye contact as I told them that I could easily break a leg with them. Then I stomped the floor as hard as I could, making a loud noise that echoed. I then slowly turned around and looked at Suzy. I then playfully said whoops, someone might have heard that.

I then laughed before running out of the bathroom. I then went and hid around the corner and pulled out my phone. I then texted a very special number and told them about Suzy and how she was dealing drugs on school property.

I then watched and waited; after a minute the two other bullies came walking out of the bathroom talking about how I was being extra weird and creepy today and making plans to bully me even worse starting as soon as I wasn’t wearing these boots.

They then left, and about five minutes later I watched as Suzy came out of the bathroom with a backpack she didn’t have when she entered, and it looked quite heavy. I knew she was dealing from school, but damn, her operation is far from small.

Suzy looks back and forth before walking down the hall, and I follow behind her, keeping out of sight. Obviously she was being careful, as she avoided all the areas with teachers and some areas with a ton of students.

She eventually makes her way out the back of the school and starts to walk around it. It was clear she was taking her stash and bailing, which would be the safe thing to do in this situation had it not been a setup. I kept following Suzy, but I pulled out my phone and started filming her.

The moment I was waiting for arrived when Suzy got to the front of the school. The special number I texted just so happened to be my sister's best friend, Ula, who also happens to be the head of the drug division at the local police station.

All I ever had to do was send her our code phrase, which is “pineapples are spicy,” along with what was going on, and she’d come take care of it. Suzy was very quickly surrounded by cops and then slammed into the ground when she threw her bags at one of them and tried to flee.

Suzy cursed them out, tried to escape, got tased, and ended up being carried to a cop car while Ula checked her bag and found a brick of marijuana, along with some very illegal pills and other illegal non-drug items.

Ula loudly said there was more than enough evidence to hook Suzy on, and that she was going to need a hell of a lawyer. Ula then turned and noticed me filming. She then put her hands on her hips and asked me why I wasn’t in class.

I panicked and stopped recording and apologized, then ran inside and towards the class I was supposed to be in. Once that lecture was over, I heard people mumbling about the cops being at school but not having any idea why.

I knew why and had the proof, and while I could do nothing with it, I could ruin Suzy’s reputation, which will stick even if she somehow gets off of the hefty charges she faces. After thinking it over, I decided to go with nuclear revenge, and I posted the video on the school's website anonymously.

I then waited, and by the time I was leaving school, everyone was gossiping about Suzy and how she was a no-good criminal, even the people who bought stuff from her. So now Suzy is a low-life loser who no one wants to associate with in order to keep their own reputations intact.

“So Raven, that was how I dealt with your first bully, and don’t worry too much. I asked Ula, my sister’s friend that I mentioned, about it, and apparently it’s Suzy’s first offense, and marijuana isn’t illegal here.”

“It’s just illegal to sell it anywhere that’s not permitted, and it’s not allowed in schools. So she won’t get jail time; instead, she’ll have to pay a hefty fine, probably get like eight months’ worth of community service, and be on probation for two years.”

“So hopefully she can use that time to work on becoming a better person. Now that I’ve told you about how Monday went and how I dealt with Suzy, it’s time for me to talk about Tuesday and how I dealt with Katlin.”

Body Swapped with the Class Goth Girl V (Ea)

Comments

The parents seemed to only need a wake-up call, one they didn't get from Raven because she was too scared and part of her believed she deserved to be treated poorly. It's not a great mindset to be in and is really hard to get out of; luckily Raven has our dear MC, who is her shining gothic knight!! As for Suzy, I just felt like sending her to prison was way too harsh. I don't really want anyone to suffer too greatly in this series, as it's about healing, acceptance, and love, and a bit of revenge.

Riley

Well, what can I say about what happened, well firstly I'm glad that Raven's parents have finally started to behave like real parents and even more! This is really impressive, I didn't expect that people could change so much, although there is a chance that this is only a temporary change, but I prefer to think that it's the other way around and they were always like this, they just wore a mask for some reason ... However, this is not so important, but what is important here is what happened to Suzy, and here I will say that Suzy got what she deserved, but in my opinion, she received (or rather will soon receive) too lenient a punishment, I understand that she is still a child and that where this happens, marijuana is not considered a drug, BUT in my opinion, her actions show that she realized that her actions were illegal, and therefore she realized the consequences (at least partially), and also in my opinion, any substances that cause addiction and cloud the mind should at least be limited (I know that my views on this issue are specific, but this is the result of my upbringing and I can't do anything about it and I don't want to, because I don't see a clear problem in this. In general, I think that Suzy's punishment should be stricter ... But in general, I liked the story, I really like such stories of revenge, of course, nothing frank is happening here, but the plot is also very good, overall I liked it and I'm waiting for the sequel!

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