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Stopover in a quiet town?

POV, Micro, Vore

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Appreciate the feedback! I will try not to have the view tumbling around as much next time, and put more light inside her mouth :)

Subsin13

I loved this one. But tha camera moves to much. And I think a view more deeper of the troath will be amazing but, hey, it's my opinion

E

Thanks! :)

Subsin13

Loved this. The concept was so unique and the animation and video were superb!

Lex Mcgrew

Thanks for the feedback. As far as going longer or more complex, it's definitely still something I am trying to avoid overdoing for the mini animations. Gotta save time to work on the bigger stuff ;)

Subsin13

It was neat, but I felt like there was too much wobbling of the camera, and the falling down into the mouth was pretty uneventful. I'd find it more interesting if for example he landed on her molar or something.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I wanted it to sort of mimic the feeling of a found - footage film, but without a character voice so it wouldn't be distracting.

Subsin13

Excellent immersion with sound FX changing with wind and fluid sounds as well as collision with objects. That's such a great small touch (pun intended) to realize the scene!

Quinn Ling

Thank you!

Subsin13

Damn, was hoping to the see the town fall to her feet at the end but regardless excellent work as always!

Mark

I appreciate the feedback!

Subsin13

Hello instead of the pov I would have preferred to see the character and see him fall in the mouth and that he sees another person falling into the mouth while screaming I did not understand the video after that is my point of seen I would have liked to see the same style as the futa vore and also with a little story. Nothing to say about the animation it's always impressive what you do I will look forward to your next video in fx and mini and the continuation of shrinking nightmare.

Fabien Berton


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