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Helluva Trio pg 78 draft

Helluva Trio pg 77

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Helluva Trio pg 85 (commentary)

Best seat in the house.

Helluva Trio pg 84 (commentary)

It's like Loona was built for this.

You're welcome to pretend that they're talking to you for the first panel.

Helluva Trio pg 83 (commentary)

Millie being all motherly. And at the final moment, Moxxie and Millie reconfirm with one another, making sure that this is something that they're both okay with and are excited by.

You don't want to have unresolved conflict for the next day.

Helluva Trio pg 82 (commentary)

So so so so so very close, and still I have to prolong the tease for another page.

It's more fun when you get the audience on the edge of their seats.

Helluva Trio pg 81 (commentary)

Loona looks a little off without her stockings. I'll probably just keep them on her in all future scenes.

Helluva Trio pg 77 draft

Helluva Trio pg 86 inks (commentary)

A callback to the beginning of the story, when Loona and Millie have their first conversation. Done so to help sell that Loona is getting exactly what she wanted from this arrangement while also showing that Moxxie/Millie are beginning to grow their own emotional connection by fulfilling these de...

Helluva Trio pg 76

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Helluva Trio pg 86 draft (script)

P1: Millie pushes a hand down Loona's navel.

MILLIE: Do you feel him filling you up? Allll the way up to here?

LOONA: I--I do!

P2: Millie pushes down, pressing against Loona's cervix

MILLIE: Does it tingle right here? Like lightning going through your body?

LOONA: Oh...

Helluva Trio pg 76 draft

Helluva Trio pg 85 inks (commentary)

It's nice to lie back and relax on a girl's lap.

Helluva Trio pg 84 inks (commentary)

Millie, with the assist.

Not many porn comics wait until 84 pages to get to the main course. But patience is a virtue, especially in sex, and it's fun to play the teasing game for as long as you can bear it.

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Helluva Trio pg 83 inks (commentary)

Millie's picked up the right language. She's started to become almost motherly here and is even guiding Moxxie's cock in gently.

Clearly, she just wants everyone to have fun.

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Helluva Trio pg 82 inks (commentary)

I enjoyed this moment because it turned out to be a very quick and easy way to identify Loona's growth in this story. It proves that she was paying attention before, not just watching the show, and that she's willing to comply with the boundaries someone else sets up.

Which is amusing, beca...

Helluva Trio pg 81 inks (commentary)

Loona has a quick recovery time, it seems. And an insatiable appetite.

Helluva Trio pg 85 draft (script)

P1: Horizontal shot of Moxxie in Loona, while Loona's head rests on Millie's lap.

LOONA: Oh Satan... oh sweet Satan...

MILLIE: Rest here on my lap, darlin'.

P2: Loona looks up at Millie.

LOONA: Am I... doing good so far?

P3: Millie looks down at her.

MILLIE: Yo...

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Helluva Trio pg 84 draft (script)

P1: Loona looks down, almost in a panic.

LOONA: Oh shit, oh shit. This is really happening.

P2: Large panel of Millie sliding up to Loona, still gripping Moxxie's dick as he enters Loona.

MILLIE: It most certainly is. Let's see how you handle the real thing.

P3: Moxxie sli...

Helluva Trio pg 83 draft (script)

P1: Millie lights up, smiling.

MILLIE: Oh! What a good girl!

P2: She saddles next to Moxxie, resting a hand down his torso as she appeals to him.

MILLIE: What do you think, hun? Do you want to?

MOXXIE: Only if you're okay with it, darling.

P3: Millie takes Moxxie's d...

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Helluva Trio pg 82 draft (script)

P1: Loona leans forward, taking Moxxie's dick.

P2: She aims the tip of his head towards her vagina.

P3: She suddenly lets go, alarmed.

LOONA: Wait. I meant... I meant to say...

P4: Loona looks up at the camera, coyly touching Moxxie's dick. She looks extremely earnest and ...

Helluva Trio pg 81 draft (script)

P1: Millie and Moxxie sit up, with Millie wiping her mouth.

MOXXIE: I think she enjoyed it.

MILLIE: I know I did.

P2: The pair look up in surprise.

LOONA (off-camera): More.

P3: Loona is exasperated, sweating profusely, and barely looks conscious.

LOONA: I stil...