At the bottom of the stairs, Leon found the escape tunnel on his left, going south, and a huge set of double doors on his right. He smiled when he saw the runic circle still glowing brightly in the air about ten feet in front of the doors.
Leon jumped down the last few steps and ran straigh...
2018-04-16 15:00:01 +0000 UTC
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[Alright, Xaphan, Ive got somewhere to be tonight, but lets talk.]
[Do you possess an Inherited Bloodline?]
Leon was a little surprised at this question, but he answered immediately. [Yes.]
[What was your ancestor?]
[The Thunderbird
probably
]
[Probably?]
<...
2018-04-13 15:00:00 +0000 UTC
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What is your impression of this young man?
Elise took a moment to think before answering. He seems to be the sort of man who hasnt had to deal with many people. Hes quiet, unexpressive even when embarrassed, uncomfortable around other people, but innocent most of all.
In...
2018-04-11 15:00:06 +0000 UTC
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Leon! Charles, who was still waiting outside of the bank, noticed Leon coming out. Leon saw Charles run up to him and collected himself. He had gone a little out of sorts after learning Adrianos name, so he clamped down on his fury and restrained his killing intent.
Charles.
2018-04-11 15:00:06 +0000 UTC
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The owner of the noodle stall really knew his stuff. Leon smiled, savoring the last few bites of steak in the bowl. The stall owner was very pleased with Leons obvious satisfaction and enjoyment of the meal, but he was even more pleased when Leon tossed him a pair of silver coins.
It hadn...
2018-04-11 15:00:01 +0000 UTC
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The sixth floor of the Heavens Eye Tower was entirely taken up by the offices of the account managers. Their job, for the most part, was to supervise the smaller Heavens Eye banks throughout the city and the rest of the Great Plateau, but when a noble came here wanting to access their account...
2018-04-11 15:00:01 +0000 UTC
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When Leon walked through the door of the vault and laid his eyes on its contents, he was left stunned. Stacks of shiny gold bars and crates of silver coins were in the majority, but there were also smaller boxes on a table in the center filled with precious stones. Sapphires, rubies, emeralds, am...
2018-04-11 15:00:01 +0000 UTC
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Wow, I wasn't expecting this much support so fast! Thank you, you guys are awesome!
I'm going to get started right now on editing, so I can get 5 chapters out to all of you by Wednesday!
2018-04-10 09:27:21 +0000 UTC
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Most of the people who lived on the north side of Teira were commoners of lesser means. All the nobility and wealthier folk lived to the south, as Teira was a very large city, and living on the south side meant almost an entire day could be shaved off when they journeyed to the capital or one of ...
2018-04-09 15:00:02 +0000 UTC
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Xaphan? Can you hear me? Leon had felt Xaphan enter his soul realm, but he wasnt clear as to how he could communicate with the demon. Artorias had told him that he would need to form his magic body before he could enter his soul realm with his own power, which meant he would need to be a si...
2018-04-09 15:00:02 +0000 UTC
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Within the secondary enchantment hub were five doors, all leading to separate cells according to the map. Two of the doors were open, showing short tunnels and empty cells several hundred feet away.
Two more doors were destroyed, matching the damage Leon had seen by the exits, with one rent...
2018-04-09 15:00:01 +0000 UTC
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The southern side of the prison was pretty much identical to the northern side. The door closed a few seconds after Leon had stepped through, leaving the caves pitch-black, but for the doors glowing red runic circle. Leon immediately went back to channeling magic into his eyes in order to see, ...
2018-04-09 15:00:00 +0000 UTC
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Whats your plan? asked Leon.
[Come
closer
Then
explain
]
Leon frowned. Xaphans voice had been extremely weak from the start, but now he could barely hear him. He jogged back into the labyrinthine halls of the prison from the locked exit. He followed the flow of magic in...
2018-04-09 15:00:00 +0000 UTC
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So, I went through several revisions over how to deal with the main character in the past year or so that Ive been actively planning this story. Perhaps the biggest change I decided on before starting to actually write was that Leon used to have a twin sister!
The story wouldve started ...
2018-04-09 08:14:11 +0000 UTC
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