(Very rough, just finished knocking it out, about 3000 words. )
A pale, thin man wearing a silver and black kilt sat upon a throne made of broken promises, a pencil and account book in his hands. His torn black t-shirt proclaimed him to be a patron of the troubadours known as Motorhead. As...
2022-07-05 00:16:04 +0000 UTC
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As the sun rose over Sedgewick, a lone figure appeared in the village square. Everyone was used to McTeeth resurrecting each morning by now, but it was still fun to watch. He always made a production of stretching and yawning as if he was getting out of bed and then dove into the village fountain...
2022-07-04 20:13:31 +0000 UTC
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BBeneath the earth, two people carefully moved along an ancient stone passage. Things were deceptive here. A small room might hide a narrow crevice that led to a grand passage way with several staircases descending to dead ends. Everything had to be mapped out and carefully noted in their journal...
2022-07-04 00:19:33 +0000 UTC
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(One of the tougher chapters I've had to write. How do you write dialog for not one, but two people who are smarter than you? I try to keep in mind that neither one has perfect information and is looking for knowledge. Wally is also has expectations based on human reactions, and Milo doesn't alwa...
2022-07-03 18:07:53 +0000 UTC
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Trying to logically think like someone smarter than you is hard. This will certainly get some revisions. Often I write something for a couple of hours, but the next day wonder what the hell I was thinking.
Some good reference material is the 4th Chapter of Butcher of Gadobhra. It's a conf...
2022-07-02 02:37:07 +0000 UTC
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As the merchant faded away, the Centurion turned to Eldren, the Runic Mage who saw to the teleportation pad. "How is our mana after that?"
Eldren saluted with a satisfied smile on his face. "A little over 78k. We actually gained over 4k mana on that exchange. The bi...
2022-07-01 01:36:57 +0000 UTC
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(Very rough draft. I write out the first draft, send to my wife for editing, then go back over it again and possible add to the story, or rework things. Also add in tables. Then maybe a second edit. Rough drafts posted here will have typos that she'll catch later. This is a short chapter an...
2022-06-30 02:30:10 +0000 UTC
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Fancy words for "Don't take a knife to a gunfight."
One side might be stronger than the other side and win 99% of the time. But that one time? That one time when the underdog stepped up and won? A great story. David and Goliath level story. Every likes that story, (except for Goliath's sid...
2022-06-29 03:09:29 +0000 UTC
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Greetings,
With over 2000 followers, and a few asking me about donating through Patreon, I added 'Set up Patreon' to my schedule. But Patreon is on a computer and counts as "New Fangled Stuff". Which means I know it's never going to be as easy as people say.
"You should try selling on...
2022-06-28 01:50:39 +0000 UTC
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