Isabella Caldimore wondered why she was still alive.
In every conceivable future, the completion of her father’s oft-alluded-to grand ritual had been the end of her. She’d known for months that he intended to use her as some main component in the proceedings. Even if he hadn’...
2025-10-10 16:00:13 +0000 UTC View PostSame deal as the last one. This is where you can leave feedback for either book 1 as a whole, or specifically book 1 part 2 (from chapter 40 and onward). I won't promise the feedback will be addressed, of course, but I will read it and decide if I agree, and make changes as I see fit :)
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2025-10-08 16:00:24 +0000 UTC View PostVivi actually had to drink a mana potion.
Sure, she hadn’t been as efficient with her killing methods as possible, particularly at the start of this whole debacle. Even so, expending enough of her magical stamina that she had to draw a potion out and quaff it surprised her. Considering th...
2025-10-08 16:00:24 +0000 UTC View PostRafael watched Vivisari rip apart a Cataclysm-level threat like it was some insect she found crawling around on the ground.
Nineteen hundred and fifty. He could read the creature’s level; they all could. The Grand System was freely handing out approximations to even those who should have ...
2025-10-06 16:00:17 +0000 UTC View PostFrustration and worry had been mounting in Vivi since her meeting with the Duke, and especially since Saffra had banged on her door in the middle of the night. Having something physical to vent on, especially a monster rather than a sapient being, was, honestly, a blessing. She might not know how...
2025-10-03 16:00:28 +0000 UTC View PostEventually, Vivi forced her gaze from where she’d torn a hole in the spatial fabric. It wasn’t nearly a disaster on the scale of the dimensional anomaly, but where that was a theoretical branch, and thus even less known, spatial spells were still bleeding-edge, not perfectly understo...
2025-10-01 16:00:17 +0000 UTC View PostVivi watched as, for the second time, the assassin’s face went slack with shock.
The assassin whose Title she finally knew, based on the skill he’d activated. She couldn’t always remember what Rafael told her, but the Red Tithe had been on a short list of ‘most dangerous individuals...
2025-09-29 16:00:00 +0000 UTC View PostVivi woke to banging on her door.
“Lady Vivi?” came Saffra’s muffled, distressed voice. “Lady Vivi, are you awake?”
Distressed?
It was embarrassing how much adrenaline dumped into her veins. She didn’t even bother rolling out of bed. She [Blinked] past the doorway, m...
2025-09-26 16:00:12 +0000 UTC View PostThe halting, mumbling explanation Saffra received wasn’t easy to follow—bordering on incoherent. Clearly not rehearsed, either aloud or in Isabella’s head. Still, Saffra pieced together the big picture, and it was as bad as she had feared.
Saffra hadn’t even done something to draw D...
2025-09-24 16:00:11 +0000 UTC View PostEight Months Earlier
Isabella Caldimore had a plan. Or more specifically, she had a goal, and any goal worth pursuing deserved a sufficiently foolproof plan. Working toward something without a guiding strategy was nothing short of idiocy; Father had taught her that. And he ...
2025-09-22 16:00:19 +0000 UTC View PostSaffra was too frazzled to practice.
And that was saying something. Practicing magic had become her solution to dealing with bad feelings. It was like saying she was too hungry to eat. But after returning from the Institute’s restricted archives—and getting to look through thos...
2025-09-19 16:00:12 +0000 UTC View PostUnfortunately, Damon’s plans primarily hinged upon another’s work and not his own. Whether or not they could be accelerated depended on the mage preparing the ritual.
Thus, carrying his growing concern over the Keresi situation, he wound through the Wardens' vault to the room w...
2025-09-17 16:00:13 +0000 UTC View PostDamon came away from the brief meeting with Nysari Keresi not nearly as pleased as he’d expected.
It should have been satisfying for once not bending to the whims of men and women he shouldn’t need to placate. Perhaps it had been how utterly unperturbed that woman had seemed de...
2025-09-15 16:00:16 +0000 UTC View PostDistracted by the incident with the strange man Tobin—and more importantly, his dagger—Vivi took a second longer to respond than she should have. She forcefully shook away the uneasy feelings and refocused.
She tried to remember the advice Rafael had given her leading up to this meeting...
2025-09-12 16:00:12 +0000 UTC View Post“You learned something concerning about the Caldimores?” Vivi asked, shifting in surprise. “What?”
“We’ll get there,” Rafael said. “What do you know of that house and its history?”
She thought for a moment, then slowly shook her head. “The name sounds the slightest...
2025-09-10 16:00:11 +0000 UTC View PostVivi’s conversation with Osmian turned out far less productive than she’d hoped. Though a fiercely educated man, he was an academic belonging to a period of history long past, and immense magical progress had been made in that time. There was no substitute for the slow, inevitable accrual of ...
2025-09-08 16:00:13 +0000 UTC View PostDraw the necessary energy from the island itself.
She could maybe manage that. But of the major magical disciplines, ritualism was by far her weakest—and certainly her worst among the three fields Osmian was testing her on. Vivisari had been an accomplished spellcaster for obviou...
2025-09-05 16:00:10 +0000 UTC View PostSeveral arcane workings activated at once.
First and foremost, a teleportation spell reached out and tried to grab Saffra—no doubt Osmian’s attempt to send her away. Vivi was near certain the spell would have bounced impotently off the defensive spells she had placed on her apprentice, ...
2025-09-03 16:00:14 +0000 UTC View Post“Osmian? The archmage?”
“Yes, the archmage! The founder of the Institute!”
“This is his door?” Vivi raised an eyebrow at the cracked-open entrance. “How so? And what’s the big deal? Why are you so flustered?”
“I’m not flustered,” Saffra said defensively. ...
2025-09-01 16:00:25 +0000 UTC View PostThe loss of the Zone Boss’s loot didn’t bother Vivi, obviously. There were a dozen higher-rank hunting grounds she could fly over to and clear out in an afternoon if she actually needed coin. She shut down Saffra’s panicked apologies for vaporizing an admittedly significant sum in crafting ...
2025-08-29 16:00:11 +0000 UTC View PostAn artifact that allowed the sharing of mana. Saffra hadn’t known such a thing existed. Could exist. A person shouldn’t be able to share mana. Rituals and enchantments came close, she supposed, since those allowed for collaboratively fueling some grand working, but they weren’t...
2025-08-27 16:00:13 +0000 UTC View PostPeople could adapt to anything. Saffra knew that on a personal level, not as some truism. Her life had veered off course wildly on two occasions now, and she’d settled into a routine both times, despite how world-ending each had seemed. And there were people who had gone through worse, she knew...
2025-08-25 16:00:17 +0000 UTC View PostThe expression on Saffra’s face was rather comical. She at least didn’t look panicked at being presented another gift—though Vivi predicted that was only thanks to superseding emotions. Wide green eyes flicked around at the huge radius of melted snow, then back to the brilliant, otherworldl...
2025-08-22 16:00:17 +0000 UTC View PostVivi had [Blinked] Saffra around a few times now, so the girl had developed resilience to spatially-induced nausea. Nevertheless, [Greater Warp] was an order of magnitude more powerful, so when the two of them popped into existence atop Prismarche’s wall, her tail dropped to the floor and she w...
2025-08-20 16:00:17 +0000 UTC View PostSaffra had traced this arrangement of runes so many times that she was sick of it. She could go the rest of her life without sketching that sequence, mentally or physically, a single instance more.
And never mind trying to manifest that design into reality. [Scorchlance] was complicated eve...
2025-08-18 16:00:16 +0000 UTC View PostThe project began in earnest.
Rhek barked commands, and, somewhat to his surprise, the Sorceress’s daughter obeyed without question—once more raising his estimation of her. Climbing the hierarchy had meant Rhek had needed to work with gigantic egos more and more commonly. Someone who wo...
2025-08-15 16:00:15 +0000 UTC View PostWith the outrageous list of materials Rhek gave to Stellan—a list he almost felt guilty for handing over—he had expected not to hear back for weeks if not longer, except perhaps a revision insisting he be reasonable with his demands. Five days at the very minimum. But it was later that same d...
2025-08-13 16:00:15 +0000 UTC View PostThe light of dawn spilled across wooden floorboards, painting Rhek’s bedroom in muted hues of orange and yellow. A long groan broke the quiet of the morning. Wood creaked as he rolled out of his cot and, reluctantly, set to his routine like a golem infused with not quite enough mana.
He s...
2025-08-11 16:00:20 +0000 UTC View PostWhile the Codex of the Hollowed Sun had occupied their initial attention, the rest of the vault had plenty of lesser—if still astounding—treasures to sift through. Mae especially lost herself in the process of rummaging around in the storage cabinets, shelves, and drawers, oohing and aahing a...
2025-08-08 16:00:09 +0000 UTC View PostVivi appreciated Rafael’s interruption, not because she was interested in the quest’s payout, but because she had no idea how to deal with a starstruck, emotional old friend who wasn’t really an old friend at all.
Meeting Winston and Rafael had gone smoothly, but tha...
2025-08-06 16:00:13 +0000 UTC View Post